Heat is heavy with moisture
weighing down the grass,
the tendrils of my hair
wet and wayward from
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I too love the way you bring the moon into play. Comparing the phases of the moon to those phases of life made this a very effective write.
Love the moon imagery in this one, the maiden and the moon go hand in hand! And of course you knew that, how clever this is. Great imagery. HG: -) xx
Wow! I love your style and your name reflects it perfectly. Nice to meet your work. Smiling at you, fighting off the crone with all her might! lol Tai
this is such a lovely poem you should be very proud thank you