Saturday, July 7, 2018

Time's Toy Comments

Rating: 4.0

An outpour of emotions
Betrayed by expectations
Moments of happiness in brief
Is paused short by deep grief.
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Srinidhi S U
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Gitanjali Krishan 09 July 2018

For someone so young to feel these emotions to beautifully string them together is admirable

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 July 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Srinidhi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sushmitha 08 July 2018

Marvellous

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Lalitha 07 July 2018

Really meaningful.

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MD Aftab 07 July 2018

Sir 😍👌👌👌👌 super sir

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Neetu 07 July 2018

Nice poem :

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Nanda Kishor J 07 July 2018

Niceeee

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Srinidhi S U

Srinidhi S U

Sullia, Karnataka, India
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