Saturday, April 15, 2006

Time's Ticking Away Comments

Rating: 2.4

The pendulum swings,
In such a perpetual way,
It keeps on moving,
In a continuous sway.
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2006

Nothing may seem possible sometimes, but everything maybe possible in time, You really get me thinking Ernestine, congratulations on yet another fine piece, love Duncan

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Rusty Daily 15 April 2006

That was fun Ernestine but you forgot to mention the Pendulum also makes wrinkles and saggy butts. lol At least my Pendulum does.

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its is the proper possessive. it's denotes 'it is' 'keeping on moving' is also grammatically incorrect. The repetition of 'time's ticking along' and 'time's ticking away' spells of hasty, unedited writing. Sorry Ernestine, despite the continuous accolades by the legion of adoring fans who never dare to point out anything wrong, I feel you need to revisit your work.

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Patricia Gale 15 April 2006

My time reading this was a delight. A tick tock and the moment is gone, great line! Patricia

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