Friday, May 17, 2019

Time's Oblivion Comments

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Today is someone's
Birthday
a gift of a poem
of his today
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 December 2020

SIR RM JI Thanks so much Sorry for such a delay I did not get your comment till today PH RENEWS HISTORY

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Rajnish Manga 26 May 2019

This is my second visit to the poem. I find it very heart-touching and emotional write. The loss of two dear friends reflects. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 25 May 2019

And through our verse we may sustain the journey. This is a tremendous tribute....to myfavourites...

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2019

Glory and Grief! ! ! ! Ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 24 May 2019

glory and gory have short lives only.........brilliant expression. Thank u for sharing this excellent piece. Anjandev Roy.

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Srijita Mondal 21 May 2019

Nice but sad acceptance of mortality of mankind.. profound poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 May 2019

MODIFIED I too will a part of history be soon fading till such time

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 May 2019

THIS ONE HAS BEEN DECLARED AS A MASTERPIECE BY MY GREATEST USA MENTORS THANKS TO U ALL IN PH

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C F 19 May 2019

Accurately expressed sentiments, very nice poem. But remember this, you are not alone, we will all be part of the past, but the important thing to ask is did we live according to our own terms and not according to some other's dictates? Please keep on writing, you enliven PoemHunter.com by your presence.

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YOUR KINDNESS beyond the lonely cloud makes this poet me equally proud t u

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Two of my best poetry fans and mentors passed away in sleep but I don't weep glory and gory have short lives only I too will a part of history be soonly fadingly till such time Abide with me...deep poem with easy language

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you and ur best friend only two r in race speed up ur pace Tagore u must be tc take it not easy the world is sleazy

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Rajnish Manga 17 May 2019

I too will a part of history be soonly.... //.... Nice philosophical musing after someone's birthday and passing away of two close friends of the poet. I appreciate this poem because it emits positivity which provides moral strength to the reader. Thanks.

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Thank friend Rajnish ji for ur kindness

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 May 2019

let come every birthday with the glory of memory

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HIGH MB OF BD THANKEEE YE

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