Sunday, November 25, 2007

Time's Journey - The Blue Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

A solar flare,
Time sizzles
On contact with human consciousness
Then disappears
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leonard daranjo
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Raj Nandy 06 November 2008

I take these five lines as a beautifully expressed philosophical summary of my long poem, 'Visions of the vast blue empyrean'! Thanks! -Raj Nandy

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Alison Cassidy 26 November 2007

You have combined the universal with the human poetically and economically in this awesome piece which takes the reader into a a personalized cosmos, rather like Gustav Holtz in his The Planets. Love 'time sizzles' in particular. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 25 November 2007

Very powerful and evocative. Wishing you strength for the journey, my poet friend. As always, Sandra

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