Time's Flight Comments

A fabulous poem.... fascinating poetic expression! Deserves top score!

Wonderfully worded work that leaps with love and dances with delight. Well done my friend!

In the last stasnza this vision of a perfectly balanced love has vanished in TIME'S FLIGHT, B-U-T in the fourth stanza you wrote: WE LIVED AND LIVED IN THE HEART OF LOVE and the whole stanza graced us with the fulfillment of love-hopes. Mymind jumped back to the fourth stanza after reading the last one. And guess what? TIME had circled around and his flight became a homecoming and the two faithful lovers were once again embracing IN THE HEART OF LOVE! Isn't that a wonderful change of events?

Time is the culprit and a cruel passerby, it sucks and drain everything from us and then laugh....A thought provoking poem, As usual 10++

In the heart of love. Nice work.

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