My wait seems
To be endless
Many changes
Stealthily creeping.
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Waiting is a timeless and endless abstract action, reminds me of Joyce' line: Time is, Time was, but Time shall be no more.......... It's time It's time now For the release From all senses.
A perfect graphic of noiseless change of Time in each and every one's life. Very nice expression. Thanks.
numbness and dumbness of the world depicted well...and poemended nicely..
I must say, it is not yet time for release! (not serious) Can't touch There's no feeling Whatsoever Yet a ton of feelings Accumulate. Powerful lines!
Beautiful write! It touches upon feelings that resonate with many of us. Thanks for sharing.
The last stanza reflects the state of many people worldwide. A good write.
It is time to touch the feelings, good write Tirupathi, thanks.
the last four lines speak for the whole poem and many people around the world..Nice to read..
Time and tide wait for no man