Monday, June 24, 2013

Time's Come Comments

Rating: 5.0

My wait seems
To be endless
Many changes
Stealthily creeping.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2013

Time and tide wait for no man

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Shahzia Batool 06 July 2013

Waiting is a timeless and endless abstract action, reminds me of Joyce' line: Time is, Time was, but Time shall be no more.......... It's time It's time now For the release From all senses.

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Somanathan Iyer 04 July 2013

A perfect graphic of noiseless change of Time in each and every one's life. Very nice expression. Thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

lovely write. All emotions seem to cease.

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Wahab Abdul 25 June 2013

numbness and dumbness of the world depicted well...and poemended nicely..

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

I must say, it is not yet time for release! (not serious) Can't touch There's no feeling Whatsoever Yet a ton of feelings Accumulate. Powerful lines!

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Savita Tyagi 25 June 2013

Beautiful write! It touches upon feelings that resonate with many of us. Thanks for sharing.

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David Wood 25 June 2013

The last stanza reflects the state of many people worldwide. A good write.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 June 2013

It is time to touch the feelings, good write Tirupathi, thanks.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 June 2013

the last four lines speak for the whole poem and many people around the world..Nice to read..

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