Saturday, November 7, 2009

Time's Cold River Comments

Rating: 5.0

At time's cold river
I only appear to drink:
Thirst creates my life.
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Steven Silent Wolf
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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 January 2016

Beautifully conceptualized and crafted haiku. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Pia Andersson 22 November 2009

Yes a hunger for life is what shold help us through time and sorrows...interesting and beautiful poem from you

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Carmen Gutierrez 09 November 2009

The thirst for anything, we are all hungry for more, hopefully knowledge and not power or money.

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