Time's always now on a lone island
Imagine on a lone remote island,
In the lap of wilderness and nowhere,
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But what if they had to respond somehow? In a land that lived moment to moment, Present was the sole thing present, And would have said: what else, time's always now! ........the essence of the poem is here. Thhis is really a beautiful narrative poem on time with nice penmanship. Thanks you dear Pathak sir.10
You're right Kumarmani, while writing the poem even I had not thought of the end like this, but it came with the sheer force of the situation the traveler was in on a lonely island. Thanks indeed for the good words on the poem.
An excellent narrative sir! I wonder how beautifully you conceive things and put them into such magnificent form of poetry! A very creditable piece of poetry....................10
But what if they had to respond somehow? In a land that lived moment to moment, Present was the sole thing present, And would have said: what else, time's always now! ........the essence of the poem is here. Thhis is really a beautiful narrative poem on time with nice penmanship. Thank you dear Pathak sir.10