Sunday, June 2, 2019

Time's Always Now On A Lone Island Comments

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Time's always now on a lone island

Imagine on a lone remote island,
In the lap of wilderness and nowhere,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2019

But what if they had to respond somehow? In a land that lived moment to moment, Present was the sole thing present, And would have said: what else, time's always now! ........the essence of the poem is here. Thhis is really a beautiful narrative poem on time with nice penmanship. Thank you dear Pathak sir.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2019

But what if they had to respond somehow? In a land that lived moment to moment, Present was the sole thing present, And would have said: what else, time's always now! ........the essence of the poem is here. Thhis is really a beautiful narrative poem on time with nice penmanship. Thanks you dear Pathak sir.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

You're right Kumarmani, while writing the poem even I had not thought of the end like this, but it came with the sheer force of the situation the traveler was in on a lonely island. Thanks indeed for the good words on the poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 June 2019

An excellent narrative sir! I wonder how beautifully you conceive things and put them into such magnificent form of poetry! A very creditable piece of poetry....................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

Thanks indeed for the good words, Dr Swain

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Kostas Lagos 03 June 2019

Perfect poem Aniruddha!

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

Thanks indeed dear poet reader.

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