Friday, August 11, 2006

Time Passed Us By Comments

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Side-by-side we sit
In the movie hall
Though hand in hand
But the mood is peculiar.
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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

A good example to say that cine life is not real life. In Cinema he may be a hero, but in real life he may be a zero. Same in the case of the heroine, who appears as a role model in the film, but another zero in the real life.Preeti you are great.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 August 2006

A very beautiful poem Preeti and the time is the precious thing in this world which cannot hold?

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Anjana Aravind 14 August 2006

Preeti, this is fantastic poetry. excellent. Anjana

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Arti Chopra 13 August 2006

very well written, evocative and haunting...loved it arti chopra

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Catastrophe King 11 August 2006

I remembered some days from the life goneby.... I had purchased 2 tickets to the cinema & imagined the seat next was she, there was the hand of the seat but...! You have the capacity to churn the heart and shake the soul..... Hey! I am awake now! A beautifully written poetry. The narration is fabulous. The imagery is just perfect.

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Brian Dorn 11 August 2006

Preeti, a very vivid and emotionally stirring write. I think we've all experienced that feeling. Great write! ! Brian

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