Time (Part 1) . Comments

I thought this really flowed, I loved it!

You think that you would be able to spell A LOT. You wouldn't say 'alittle' would you? Well you just might you say 'alot'. Very good job it's only three letters. The word 'A' and then a space, then 'LOT'. If your going to write a poem, why don't we use real words? Your poem would of made more sense if time even existed.

Very nicely written.

A nice poem on Time........

I guess you've got more time to do these poems on time? Good one! Linda

time... timing... that's what i always miss..lol! nice!

nice i enjoy this one you used opposite and rhyming nice: D

Time is the great equalizer in life. When we run out of it, we're all dead. You really covered all the bases, very creative. I enjoy reading your poems

wow great idea for a poem, i love it.

Well done, my friend. Time, enemy and friend. We can't get more or try to lend, anyway, good work then.

Jose, I hear and feel the passion you put into writing this poem...Ah! The voice and heart of a poet! Dorothy