Saturday, March 19, 2011

Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Help how much my heart hurts
my mouth is as dry as a desert
my throught is sore
my voice is a goner
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jana ghossein
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Ririn Andini 10 November 2021

Thank you for writing this poem

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Bob Ross 03 November 2019

Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts, Har, Har, Har

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Bob Ross 03 November 2019

Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts

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The criminal boys 07 May 2019

Im robbing a bank oh wait the popo are here oh no🙃

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Skyler 02 December 2018

what year did this poem come out

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Wooop wooop wwoooooop wooop the popo are here, ! Wooop woop🚔🚓🚔🕋💵💴💎nooooo

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Crim boys 07 May 2019

Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee😫🔫🏴‍☠️

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Crim boys 07 May 2019

Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee😫🔫🏴‍☠️

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Oooop 07 May 2019

Glob dober Pooo

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courtney 27 November 2018

What is the form of poetry. Haiku?

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basilde 12 May 2018

Wat is the poem about exactly

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GUD VIBEZZZZZ 29 April 2020

It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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GUD VIBEZZZZZ 29 April 2020

It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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GUD VIBEZZZZZ 29 April 2020

It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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GUD VIBEZZZZZ 29 April 2020

It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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GUD VIBEZZZZZ 29 April 2020

It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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Bianca S 12 March 2018

this poem is a little sad: (

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I''m just a guy 06 February 2018

i don't understand........

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James Fischer 02 February 2017

weiner weiner weiner weiner weiner weiner weeeeeeeiner

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Dawood Muzaffer 26 November 2016

i could barely imagine it but i could really tell that it has really poem like words

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Adi Cox 02 April 2011

I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this?

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Adi Cox 02 April 2011

I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this?

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