Thursday, March 22, 2007

Time (Our Saboteur) Comments

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Time is our disguised saboteur
that walks off with our dreams
and leaves us empty handed.
It hinders our free spirit
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Michael Fischer
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Brian Hinckley 16 May 2007

Very good job, Micheal. It's true how we dont seem to have control as the 'globe' shakes and shudders. We just need to do our own jazz and not worry about time as much as we do. We only have so much of it and every moment of it is precious.

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Christinne Radu 22 March 2007

Finely written piece of poetry. And honest.

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Michael Fischer

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