Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Time My Past My Future! ! ! Comments

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Time My Past My Future
The time is racing my past behind me
NO!
My past in front,
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CHAUNTAE RIDLEY
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Risha : Ahmed 23 January 2008

So much pain in your poem.

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Aaron Combs 18 January 2008

i like the sens of urgency too...

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John Nightingale 16 January 2008

Like how you use time to add urgency to the poem.

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