Time Machine Comments

Great idea of time machine, and i like the play of words mind..fallen apart and world torn apart creating a causality-consequences rhythmical sensation..Cristina Teodor

Wait Mr. can you give me a full machine plan (scroll) i want to build it to travel future and tell others like you have done hahahahahaha..Joking :) Really i love this..and if we can travel the time and able to fix all mistakes it must be good...but life could be harder too because people will always take opportunity for their own benefits..so history cant be fixed too because it always changed :) it just a thought..but if it only happened to nice one like you oh it will heavenly good! i love this poem_Unwritten Soul

Wait Mr. can you give me a full machine plan (scroll) i want to build it to travel future and tell others like you have done hahahahahaha..Joking :) Really i love this..and if we can travel the time and able to fix all mistakes it must be good...but life could be harder too because people will always take opportunity for their own benefits..so history cant be fixed too because it always changed :) it just a thought..but if it only happened to nice one like you oh it will heavenly good! i love this poem_Unwritten Soul

Very nice, short and sweet.

this is very good, such a meaningful poem

Greed like the fabled story tell Tom T Hall did sing - interesting write

This is a very sweet poem, simple but deep and enticing, I like it, I will read it again

I would be grateful to read such sophisticated and beautiful poem. I enjoyed it a lot! Keep writing and never stop...

Great poem my friend, everything i was going to say, Vipins and LaSoaphia said it!

Enjoyed it. You have a good imagination. Sometimes wish I could just hop on that machine and travel sometime else. Please read my new poems. Would love to hear from you.

Very interesting. Vipins gave an answer I would like to say, however, I suggest do not dwell on the problems, because what you think you get. If you live each day as a new day, and hope in a better tomorrow, that will come to you. I have it, because I do not care what goes on far from me, even near, I know who ever is there that is their lesson in life to overcome and learn from. I am in the hands of a wonderful God, that is what I know. However, the poem is written beautifully picturing the present situations.

Dave, I really like that poem. It gives us something to think about.

nice poem, simple and so real.

great poem, strong word and the sad truth....we all have to think about it. thanks for your thoughts. your poem is very useful. i really enjoy it

wow! lovely...................

A VERY BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT AND THE CONCEPT IS NEW AND UNIQUE FOR THIS THE POEM DESERVES 100/ 100

******************** |do not dwell in the past, |do not dream of the future, |concentrate the mind |on the present moment. ********************* 'tis a great poem! ! ! ! top marks

a fare reaching poem - good write

Mr. Walker im very inspired by this poem....its So true....much respect

Great poem and very relevant in 2012! !