Saturday, November 12, 2016

Time Machine Comments

Rating: 5.0

every clock is spinning fast
the time machine moves on
seasons race from spring to fall
another year has gone
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Barry Middleton
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Annette Aitken 13 November 2016

What a beautiful write here Barry...its like a snip bits of life...written beautifully.... Annette

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Barry Middleton 13 November 2016

Thanks again. Glad you liked it................

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Spock The Vegan 12 November 2016

Another good poem Barry. You might want to read my poem Unless time is an Illusion if you haven't.

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Barry Middleton 12 November 2016

Thanks Spock. I'll check it out right now.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 12 November 2016

Nice poem about the passing of times. You have got a catchy title, I once thought you going to talk about the watch, since you mentioned MACHINE. Thank you for sharing.

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Barry Middleton 12 November 2016

Thank you for the comment. The term Time Machine refers to the novel by British writer H.G. Wells which has been made into a movie twice in America.

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