Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Time Killls Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't like Time,
I don't like Years
Numbers,
Biting away
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Sandra Feldman
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Julia Luber 04 August 2019

Succinct, clever and true to the point

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Jane Campion 01 August 2019

When bored we kill time, so to speak. No one can kill time as it kills us. Sandra, I think your poem would make a good song. Repeat each line the rhythm is there. Maybe, you have inspired a song in me. Many thanks for your wonderful comments.

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Ravinder Soni 01 August 2019

You have laid bare a common idiom very cleverly. Great.

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