Monday, January 17, 2005

Time Is Stiff Comments

Rating: 5.0

time is stiff

the last brown leaf
is letting grip go
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Jimi Doyle
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Sue Ann Simar 01 November 2006

the more I read this the more I like it. at first I felt the word thrilling out of place, but now I feel this is a ten. The poem has its own grip, squeeze, and force. Thank you.

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