time is something that you can't stop
you know it's there and you want to control it but you can't
you see people that are always busy and never have enough time
while you have enough time left to stare out the window with nothing on your mind
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'All the people that hurt your friends or family; they don't deserve to die. They deserve to suffer.' I can really relate to this poem. Even though its your first, the words really are powerful. You have a great understanding of many things in life. Keep writing! Great job.
i'm glad you like it and thanks for the comment, unfortunaly i don't have the time right now to write but still i'm glad you like it