Time Is Short Comments
I want to stay forever, but I can't;
to this old world we all must bid goodbye.
It does no good to sit and rave and rant,
nor try to understand the reason why.
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Beautiful. I really like the picture also. Your note about kindness is so compassionate, I love that.
Belle, both your poem and your notes express so very well the beliefs of a devout Christian. I am not a bible thumping Christian, but I made a promise to God in 1978 to spread His Word. Nothing has stopped me from doing this. And nothing, nor no one, will ever do so! illistian
Marvelous poem, Belle! As Cowboy Ron said, this sonnet is flawless in both form and content. Extremely well done!
I hope you got my comment on your poem, And also Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'The value of life and oxygen
Wow awesome poem i totally agree. Its great that you will be ready to fly whenever God wants. I hope i am ready too
Nice one Bella, I believe in Almighty and the day of judgement and Jesus (Pbuh) a mighty messenger of Almighty.5***
Hi Linda, this is the first poem of yours that I have read. It exudes a wonderful feeling of lone and kindness. The qualities Christianity stands for. Although I am not a Christian, I often read The Holy Bible as I do Gita. So I could easily relate to your poem. Perhaps.
A wonderful sonnet, Belle, flawless in form and content. Five stars for you!
Thank you Ron. I am missing you. I hope you are doing well, wherever you are now.
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7/18/2025 9:47:12 PM # 1.0.0
"there is life beyond this sphere"
Rob, thank you so much for commenting on this older poem of mine.