. Time Is Not A River Comments

beautiful like my

this is the wink of the eye that searches and i just wish time was a dream and i am hearing that here, i guess i just want to breathe on the stream and count the numbers precisely

this is the only moment we haveto live. concept of time beautifully brought out.

I am in full agreement with your concept of time. I have written on similar concepts! -Raj Nandy

Encapsules with finesse the very essence of time. Best wishes to you Mary.

Your perception of time is elegant! Cheers Anita

Nice write Mary! ! You can take time though, to write this capturing poem! ! *10*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad