Saturday, November 12, 2016

Time Is Coming Closer Comments

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I can gain I am not a looser,
I know time is coming closer.
Many feel life is clumsy sure,
But do not perceive air is pure.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 24 October 2020

You are a gainer and not a loser. As per time we move with you and feel dignity. This poem is lovely.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2019

Pure, sure! ! High level; Muse of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Time is closer. Everything should be learnt soon. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Pushpendra Patel 16 February 2019

We should be gainer and not the loser. A nice message is shared in this poem. Thank you sir.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 November 2016

Oh, This Is So So Wonderful! ! ! Speaks Right To The Heart So Beautifully! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Created! ! ! ! ! Wonderful Poetry! ! ! ! ! Adding To Favorites! ! ! 10s! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2016

picture of Rahul Gaur xYes everything is an illusion. Nicely written sir! 11 Mar 2015 by Rahul Gaur | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely poem tfs ;) 11 Mar 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt x Neat and fluently written 11 Mar 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xWise words, beautiful poetry 11 Mar 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......an excellent write....and so true, love is more precious than any gold or silver ★ 12 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xAn excellent composition....wonderful write! 8 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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