Sunday, May 6, 2007

Time In A Bottle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Imagine the catastrophy
If we could capture time in a bottle
Lasting would not only be delight
But also moments of emotional throttle
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Joan Marques
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Matt Johnston 14 April 2008

I like the third stanza in particular; it stands out in my opinion.

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Ananda Alves 06 May 2007

Oh my god, Joan. I really loved this poem. Time is one of the most precious things for me and it's something I really believe in. I'll read some other poems of you. If you have time, read mine. Feel free to comment, send me hints, doesn't matter, I'm new here. Congrats, ~ Ann ~

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Joan Marques

Joan Marques

Paramaribo, Suriname
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