Friday, September 4, 2020
Time In A Bottle Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I once put time in a bottle,
That was many years ago.
Every day it leaked out,
With nothing left to show.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
04 September 2020
A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Great metaphor and nice rhyme. Liked the ultimate stanza. Beautifully written.
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7/19/2025 11:30:45 AM # 1.0.0
Intriguing composition Shaun. I really wish I could place time in a bottle in order to control it in some way and make sense of it. Alas time waits for no man...or woman. Anyhow, it's a timetastic ten from me!