Friday, May 6, 2011

Time If Only... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The quiet and calm beckons yet remains out of reach,
The wrong place, the wrong time… is timeless.
The mind still spins, like a top out of control,
Longing for that sweetness that was meant to please.
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Errol Anderson
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Tai Chi Italy 07 May 2011

I really liked this emotional rollercoaster in poetic deed. Fabulous work You nailed it to my cross. Smiling at you Tai

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Errol Anderson

Errol Anderson

Jamaica, but now live in Canada.
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