Time Heals Comments

Your poem has such a rhythm to it and that is a powerful adding the beat of time passing underneath the words. You handle the reins of writing very very adeptly. Excellent piece.

This is a very moving work. Time, like the oceans, can move mountains...

This is very thought provoking, I really like it

I like your style of rhyming and it's always perfect and beautiful..sort of like the old style of poetry, which I try to write sometimes and which is always pleasing.

[For even as the oceans Will wear away a stone, Time mellows the emotions To help the pain be borne. ]-great poem with a mesage so clear. I loved it.10+

This poem is true, and it shows the journey of time itself, healing what could be healed. Nice write...

nice write here.

Beautiful Adeline... a poem of hope beyond the pain presented by life's trials and tribulations. Shirley

A well-crafted poem with a clear message.

Adeline: Very well written, as usual, and I love the smoothness of your rythem. Really enjoyed it. You got my 10+++ Lynn

a joyous nd steady pull of time and emotions shine through in this poem, i love it

Adeline, this is beautiful and sad. I can identify with this one. This is the third one of yours I have read. I like your style. Ron

Hi Adeline, A very nicely constructed piece of poetry that takes the reader on a journey with beginning, middle and end. The message in your poetry is profound and meaningful and the presentation as one might expect is first class. Take care, Neil.

Lovely poem, difficult subject. Tightly written and well crafted, beautiful first four lines. See 'The Late Gift' Thank you and keep well.