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Time Heals Comments

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Time heals
love is a disease and i I'm very ill
i tried to keep focused BUT! !
the thoughts in my mind are like vultures waiting for a kill
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salma. torrez
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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2014

Your use of Simile - The thoughts in my mind are like vultures waiting for a kill - captured the sorrows in your heart beautifully. Time is indeed the greatest healer as it alters our perspectives, in such a way that we begin to look down on our tribulations, and accept that which are beyond the limits of our circumstances. Lovely work of art. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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