Friday, September 1, 2006

Time Has Come Comments

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Lady don't you know
time has come
going to let it show
what you have done
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Geoff Warden
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Gregory Gunn 25 October 2006

'You're the light of my day this I now know at night my shelter from the raging storm' The most poignant part of the poem was this segment. I would have injected more precise commas and semi-colons throughout, but that is my traditional approach, which doesn't truly apply anymore. Damn the punctuation, the sweet sentiment is all that matters. Lovely.

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