Time Giggles Comments

Your poems expresses that universal role parents play in their children's lives. Proudly and hopefully watching them grow over time. Of course, eventually that child will grow up and have children and the cycle goes on. You personify time as ever-present and it seems benevolent. That's good. But in much western poetry time is the enemy of humankind. Just take Shakespeare's SONNETS, for example. Or Andrew Marvell who wrote in fear - AT MY BACK I ALWAYS HEAR TIME'S WINGED CHARIOT HURRYING NEAR. That's time as Death, whereas in your poem you give us Time as Life.

Life takes birth as an innocent child. Parents guide. Characteristics of life grow influenced by society. Beautiful lines.

A beautiful rhyming composition. Love the concluding stanza. A nice job.