Time For A Lesson Comments
I listened to a stranger,
Still chewing, mulling it over;
In my mind.
Unseen message carrier,
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Great lessons we learn from life. people come and go. some remain with us as true friends. some go away. some are thre for a certain time.. all for good. the reasons why they came into our lives, we do not know often. we shall not judge anyone. fill the heart with goodness and go forward united with God Almighty. tony
Dr. tony Brahmin, Encouragement is such a gift. It is affirmation; like a glistening ribbon when another acknowledges. Thank you for reviewing and then leaving your feelings-thoughts on this subject. Lessons.. Moving forward as you say with help and power of God Almighty. Blessings, Kathy
k am here to read this again. It still carries a freshness and a welcome sense of come explore with me... I do have one complaint and it is a serious one- - -I want more poems posted by you ASAP.... you have style and you have fans who look forward to reading you. :)
Susan Williams, You have style and grace! Just the willing open kindness is so refreshing. I hope you continue to be just as wonderful as you are. Thanks again for reading and for commenting. Your encouragement is priceless. Blessings, Kathy
A wonderful poem that inspires us to take lessons from life's experiences. Well done!
a bit tricky for me to follow, but i believe i did follow it enough to get the gist and perhaps more! i like the sound of it as i read it silently. i like when there is a Poet's Notes. but, unless you don't mind me finding typos, you might do more proofreading. JUST a suggestion. hee-hee. bri :)
Bri Edwards, your input is so welcome! I am trying to do my best so please know that any help is appreciated. You are kind and balanced in approach which is truly a treasure! Yes this poem is the result of a negative response and I simply was endeavoring to learn and create a learning and writing opportunity within said experience. We all can learn and sometimes it is good to admit the need.....................Thanks so much for coming by and giving your fun review and input........It means a lot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Blessings to you..................Kathy
I enjoyed the staccato, almost stream of consciousness delivery of this piece. It felt as if we were privileged to witness the actual working of your mind parsing, evaluating, considering, and formulating a response to the critique proffered. It is so effective that the actual data of the critique is not revealed, so that we may focus instead on the response and effect. Well done, Kathy.
Seamus O' Brian, Well you have brought a sweet ray of light to this heart. I am floored to see your response. People like you make make the world a brighter place. I hope you are enjoying this season now moving into winter and Christmas time. Wishing you all blessings in your own life and all like that. Bye...............Kathy
Much truth expressed here. Here, in my opinion is the best part: I am not you, nor you me; Timid inspiration- Agree to disagree.
Kim Barney, Accepting that others are different in thought, and many other ways we count is ok and in fact refreshing. Hopefully we learn from each other! We can hope and try right? Anyway you know it is nice to hear from others and receive there feelings and position from what we write. So thank you for yours. It is so nice to hear from you. Blessings this December night. Kathy
Sometimes quite unexpectedly words of wisdom flow to us. It might have been dropped by a total stranger. However it might give us a new dimension to life and help us find out in what all areas we should effect a change. Such words can be easily brushed aside as a stranger's random words. But you have found them to be a step towards reaching finesse and have taken those words readily to the extent of chewing them and mulling over them. Great piece Kathy!
Thanks Valsa George, An experience which presented itself in a kind of unexpected way. I felt that something should be done so gave it a lot of thought and just processed my feeling into this poem. Your review was insightful and appreciated. Thank you very much. Blessings kathy
I like the presentation of this poem- and I am glad you took time to give this piece the perfect title. Throughout the poem I kept thinking of all the lessons we receive in life and give as well. For the teacher there are lesson plans, for the student there is either interest or yawns. It doesn't change much as these students grow up and life starts teaching them lessons. They still either listen and absorb and contemplate or they yawn. Yawners tend to blunder through life wondering why they never seem to get anywhere. I digress. This was a very worthwhile piece of writing. Be kind to us and post more poems... much more!
Susan Williams, It's fun and rewarding to touch base with others here. I find it really interesting how many can find a different viewpoint and come from a different angle because of where they may be in their own life process. I hope that we as humanity can learn to be patient with each other as we work out this life of ours. Thanks so much for your honest and forthright response. Very cool! ! Blessings to you...............Kathy
Wow! ! ! Wow! ! ! Wow! ! ! How Deeply Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Just Beautifully Written! ! ! ! ! Very Felt! ! ! ! ! Thank You Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
Rebecca Navarre, Like children being given instruction within the classroom. Listening we ponder instruction. Opportunities embraced or not taken. Time is our instructor in every life season. Thank you so very much for your happy and enthusiastic response. Your are so nice! Blessings in your life and writing. kathy
Experiences make us to face challenges easily. Good. Congratulations!
Bisy Untan, May we all find opportunities for life growth and maturity and then recognize that these difficult experiences are really a gift! Blessings to you, Kathy
....I am not you, nor you me; Timid inspiration- Agree to disagree.... A very positive minded poet who is able to find the best from what she sees or hears. The poet sure amused us with her quality thoughts. Thanks for sharing poet.
I wanted to see a summer poem by you since your Autumn poem related fall colors to the earlier season. Writing this poem is not really about summer, it's rather an assessment of your view of our human life as one of continual growth and learning, not book learning so much as learning about life by living it with full awareness, sensitivity to our surroundings, responsiveness to the messages hidden in our experiences. This is the path toward Wisdom and I sensed a very American inspiration here as Nature informs your Spirit. This is what Thoreau embodied in his prose and poetry and we can all grow from his example. New England - Minnesota - Oregon: it's the landscape of America that inspires us! !
Daniel Brick, I appreciate your thoughtful input. It is so nice that everyone can receive something different from another's sharing of thier experiences. I do like what you have to say here for learning is so important and looking to learn and not just waiting. Well thankyou I read your input through twice as it is so good. Blessings to you...............Kathy
Daniel Brick, It is refreshing to realize the interpretation of others to a piece shared. This was one that was written a while back in response to a comment I read talking about narrow mindedness. I got to thinking about it and this was the result. Bless you for your honest thoughtful response..................Kathy
A very well constructed poem. I like it.......Conception to finesse process, I am not you, nor you me; Timid inspiration- Agree to disagree....... Thank you very much for sharing. I will give 10 for this. With regards, Chan.
Dear Mr. Chan, Yes this poem was a long time in coming but because of this it had to be lesson. Tickles me to see anyone liking my rather humble efforts for I am not fancy. I am not you, nor you me important. We just all are fighting in a different battle. i would rather see we people join forces against personal struggles and help each other. Bless you for responding. I pray you find lessons in your life! ............Kathy
Mr. Asuncion, Thankyou for reading time for a lesson. I can use lessons and grab them when I can not always willingly but stubbornly........................I wish you God's grace............Kathy
Mr. Rarooqui, Thankyou for reading my admittance of needing to learn a lesson. We all are on a life journeywith studying and tests to be worked through...............This was one of mine.............I wish you every good gift from the Father of Lights in whom is no shadow of turning. Kathy
The lessons of life! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Mr. Louis, Thank you for taking time out of your life to encourage this simple soul. I guess that lessons come when they come. I wish not to miss them. Here is to wisdom gained and life a test for good. God Bless you sir! Kathy
this is really a nice poem.... the thoughts and vies about life is nice.
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