Time By Time Comments

Great work Saeid, especially the flow! I just love it because it is so positive like, get a life and make it all happen kinda poem. The way you used these words - naked sky, the moon, the tide and, the sun, the shine, the crazy vine, all added to the quick pace. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

there is no time to hold the time...great poem................waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww

Rhythm and rhyme are very fine. CP

To wipe the dark and paint the white..Great idea :) Thanks for sharing this poem, Saeid. Best wishes. A.

Very inspiring! Thanks for sharing!