Saturday, February 6, 2016

Time And Space Comments

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Rend a hole in time
And space…Watch all the other
Dimensions spill through
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David Whalen
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Unwritten Soul 06 February 2016

If the dimension breaks all we have are spaces and time till it collides again we will lost because so much they are..too travel..too far beautiful work David :)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 06 February 2016

Excellent senryu and very introspective piece, the last line as a great impact.

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David Whalen

David Whalen

Covington Kentucky
David Whalen
David Whalen
Covington Kentucky
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