Just past the ordinary,
The road becomes obscure
where space defies
Three dimensions
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time and space is very important in handling burdens in life... it is the great instrument also on how to reach the goal...ur poem is nice romeo...congrats for the top rate...congratulations...
Beautiful and inspiring poem! This poem is fantastic in so many ways but I think my favourite line is 'Conviction throughout existence Stays the essence of a goal... '. I completely agree with this poem - we all need goals to have a purpose and meaning in this life.
Time and space are the playground of the soul... Very nice poem...
life, not bound by the cage of the body, or the limits of our conceptions... well written poem, like it very much!
congratulation for this poem too, my friend. take care. may god bless you. sincere wishes - ramesh rai