Saturday, November 19, 2011

Time And Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just past the ordinary,
The road becomes obscure
where space defies
Three dimensions
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Romeo Della Valle
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Ramesh Rai 24 November 2011

congratulation for this poem too, my friend. take care. may god bless you. sincere wishes - ramesh rai

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Lady Grace 22 November 2011

time and space is very important in handling burdens in life... it is the great instrument also on how to reach the goal...ur poem is nice romeo...congrats for the top rate...congratulations...

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Lenore Lee 22 November 2011

Beautiful and inspiring poem! This poem is fantastic in so many ways but I think my favourite line is 'Conviction throughout existence Stays the essence of a goal... '. I completely agree with this poem - we all need goals to have a purpose and meaning in this life.

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Cosmic Dreamer 20 November 2011

Time and space are the playground of the soul... Very nice poem...

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Eric Cockrell 19 November 2011

life, not bound by the cage of the body, or the limits of our conceptions... well written poem, like it very much!

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