Saturday, July 6, 2013

Time And Me Comments

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When time was more,
we were less,
when time declined,
we were raised,
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Itai Oscar 10 July 2013

I like it...deep thinking

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Subodh Pandey 10 July 2013

it goes on forever....lovely write

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Abhishek Mishra 07 July 2013

Though short but nice one: -) ..

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Soulful Heart 07 July 2013

Short n punched wisely.......thoughts so simple n universal

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Vishal Sharma 07 July 2013

wow great lines one of your best

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Hazel Durham 06 July 2013

Love this great piece full of wisdom! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 July 2013

Yeah time outlasts us. A fine poem in brief. I like it! Hope u read mine too.

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