Thursday, November 5, 2009

Time And Distance Comments

Rating: 3.4

Time has always something to play for fate
Destiny’s hands shows the right chosen way
When to let go, when to cut loose in its rhyme
He has the final say to our paths in time
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Catrina Heart
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Walter Sanson Lotilla 13 March 2017

Time waits for no one... but love will... entwined to one's heart forever. God bless you dear Heart... my friend

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Souren Mondal 11 March 2016

A beautiful poem.... Thank you.....

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Ency Bearis 11 November 2009

A very passionate poem...touched my heart....10

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Daniel Kempson 06 November 2009

Heart by name heart by nature this so good may your wishes come true 10 Daniel

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Kesav Easwaran 06 November 2009

good co-written piece, Catrina Heart...a poem off your heart!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 November 2009

I pray one day fate delivers you into my arms how sweet this line is to read! shan

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THIS IS GOOD. I LIKE IT. A WHOLE LOT.

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Lady Grace 05 November 2009

time and distance are not the hindrance for your true love expressed here nomatter how far, ...he knows nomatter how difficult, ..he'll come...

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Eyan Desir 05 November 2009

Well a very romantic Poem Lady Catrina very touching.. Heartfelt wow...very beautiful Good job..

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Fay Slimm 05 November 2009

A sweet and tender profession of love Catrina - - and has a sadness too which shows in much of the imagery - - - wishing all your dreams come true - - soon - - hugs from Fay.. xx

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Marieta Maglas 05 November 2009

wonderful cognitive, extended metaphors, used to personify the time and the destiny: ''Time has always something to play for fate Destiny’s hands shows the right chosen way When to let go, when to cut loose in its rhyme He has the final say to our paths in time'' wonderful metaphorical poem, lovely rhymes, thank you for sharing..10+++++++++

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Carol Gall 05 November 2009

lovely catrina loves promise 10

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