Tuesday, July 14, 2009

(*time An Open Door* Comments

Rating: 2.1

Time is moving
at the speed of light
everything chaos
a mess and at the same time alright
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Afzal Shauq 14 August 2009

Time is pacing while secrets are kept never spoken of until up they crept yes time is an open door... incidents occurs and and struggles cope with.. and the idea you expressed here is impressive and heartfelt one..liked it very much and let me say well done erika dear for good poetry.10/10

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