Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Time All Arush Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tumbling one upon another
In passing flight the moments speed.
Waiting not for us to wonder,
Catch the sense or see the need
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Fay Slimm
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Robert Howard 18 December 2008

Great use of language. I like the occasional use of rhyme. It seems to adeptly mix order and freedom. I have a parallel but different perception of time; I like to imagine that every time is now and and every place is here. The present is therefore golden and not at all desperate.

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