Time Against Time Comments

A poignant and.touching life story. Wonderful words with great imagery showing that life is somewhere lost in the seed.of.time. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed write.

A heart-touching poem about your life journey. Beautiful imagery to convey the inner struggles and turmoils of the human heart. Very sponteneous flow of powerful feelings.

I also feel the same as you my dearest Master.. (Though I have no such nostalgia about the past life) .. The pine for not responding to time, The pain of not touching the spirit, Only vague memory to die with Mind.

" The seed unborn is hovering with the songs of birds, The pine for not responding to time, The pain of not touching the spirit, Only vague memory to die with Mind."

" Only pain of not touching life, " " The road to life is blocked, Only moving with faint delight, " " Still still the spirit is missing, The joy of living is no more joy, Only wasting time with wrong time, " " My indifferent being, my fruitless self, Thought upon thought and no Joy, "

Without blossoming I am with pain, Maturing day by day with no root, My pain is my failure, my death, I died years ago without hope, The hope of becoming was nipped

Very happy portrait to show with a melancholy poem. Beautiful woeful reflection on the draining intensity of the past if one is not active and fulfilling dreams for the future. Powerful, as Prabir always is.

All hope is just dust of time, Burnt with ceasing fire. ceaseless...may better be PG UR the light the world wants to c reading you I feel like being at sea Give notes please Clogged minds must know....... what lovely seeds you alone can sow TIME ALONE does know

i like ur 32 smilingly will read this one lately PG HA HA LOL gggggggggggg

A well crafted allegory, Prabir...10++++