Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Time: A Precious Gold Comments

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Life's important tool is time
It's value in life is prime,

Time is a precious gold
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Veer Dhiman
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aditi gupta 20 June 2019

awesome poem... i adore your poem...

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Rajnish Manga 11 October 2016

Life's important tool is time It's value in life is prime..... / Excellent interpretation of time and its stupendous role in our lives. It is for us to capture the opportunities and take tests offered by it as and when they come. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem studded with perfect rhyme and ideas.

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Kelly Kurt 07 September 2016

The concept of time has been a muse to many

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Menato San 07 September 2016

So beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 06 September 2016

Lovely depiction of Time as the greatest of all resources available to humanity, elegantly penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with insight. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Veer. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2016

Yes, you are true in expression. Time gives us strength and takes in to closer to God. Time talks about values and responsibilities. Nice and Excellent poem this is...10

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