Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Time Comments

Rating: 4.0

A heart beats
a clock ticks
the years roll by

Which decides
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a good thought. an unanswered question. a good poem

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Smoky Hoss 13 November 2012

Love the symbology, a heart, a clock, time... few words giving many thoughts.

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Dee Corpolongo 13 November 2012

A short but makes you wonder, great poem. I love how you can say so much in so little words!

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Dee Corpolongo 13 November 2012

A short but makes you wonder, great poem. I love how you can say so much in so little words!

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John Brown 10 November 2012

You don't waste words Dave, do you?

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The title just reminded me of a book by Jeffrey Archaars.. Only Time Will Tell.. And the write above just proves likewise, The_African_Son

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