Tuesday, April 24, 2012

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Does anyone know the reason?
Has anyone deciphered the great-rhyme?
Who will stand beside me
When it comes my time for dying?
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Smoky Hoss
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Valerie Dohren 29 April 2012

A great poem Smoky as always, very philosophical.

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Wendy Thopliss 28 April 2012

Don; t want to know the time or day but i understand what you are trying to say. Very interesting and good read Smoky. Well done.

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Dave Walker 27 April 2012

Really love this, so many great lines in this. I have had a lot of thoughts on time in my life but never really come up with any answers, Before the time comes, for our souls to understand reality. Really love that line. A fantastic poem.

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Juan Olivarez 25 April 2012

Maybe it is not a good thing to know. I believe we would go mad knowing the future. Just trust in the carpenter.

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Eric Cockrell 24 April 2012

'the kingdom of heaven within us...', the door of death, just that, a door! good thoughts!

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