Time is flowing
Like a wagon moving
Flowers are falling
With a race, perishing
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Yes, time goes by really fast and we should focus more on the important things of our lives such as love, nature instead of material ones. A great idea for a poem!
i love this one, short and thoughtful! keep it up. good luck and thanks for sharing it again :)
kon kehta he k haalaat badal jaen gey waqt guzray ga tou hum sath guzar jaen gey...i think man standing alone, or apart is an illusion...man is not a separate being but the passing time casts it's effect on him indeed!
ur poems r gr8..u pot in them all kind of ideeas..love..nature..thinkings..is nice and full of soul some of them..but u must work litlle on ur englesh.r some mistakes were u can`t understand the meeneng of the word in that moment..i hope u not mad at me..i just sayng.and i cordiallly invite u to read my poems too and comment..pls.
time lost will never be taken back so better be good and not greedy your idea speaks the truth
liked your sense of flow. keep growing.10 lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
As the saying goes TIME IS GOLD. A beautiful poem to remind us that time is fleeting as the natue and the humankind. Never regret the fleeting time used in writing such a tasteful poem....Thanks for sharing.
well rhymed, liked it