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Your poem is long but meaningful. I just don't like the part when the girl was with a boy in the pond. For me, if you will use poetry to share some values, then it would be a good use of poetry! But your poem is good and I just can't copy the lines that I have appreciated because it's long! By the way, I've added you in my friends' list.

Long...very long...just the way I like it. This is the memoir of the growth of a young woman and how time is everlasting and affects us all. Very good, Ms. Sim.

You certainly can create your meaning, like the moon creates the tides, push and pull, twi and la. I don't use this word to describe many people I would think it fits you perfectly. A starfaller, you are talented.

such imagery and storytelling...I love this poem's content and theme please keep writing Stephanie 10/10 phenomenal poem CJ Wright