The clock kept ticking everyday,
I wanted to talk but what should I say,
How would I start, what was my line?
What if made things worse and not fine.
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this is a very nice well crafted poem..the flow is good and rhymes nicely and the theme is substantial...very good...10
I'm a sucker when it comes to rhyming, This one flowed so nicely. Keep it up
rhymes indeed carry the poem and it is the soul of the poem..marvelous work my friend