Saturday, February 28, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

The clock kept ticking everyday,
I wanted to talk but what should I say,
How would I start, what was my line?
What if made things worse and not fine.
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Nashy Lamen
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

rhymes indeed carry the poem and it is the soul of the poem..marvelous work my friend

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Ency Bearis 20 April 2009

this is a very nice well crafted poem..the flow is good and rhymes nicely and the theme is substantial...very good...10

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Christine Kerr 08 March 2009

I'm a sucker when it comes to rhyming, This one flowed so nicely. Keep it up

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