Friday, June 16, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

Like two leaves
Gently swirling, twirling
Briefly touching
Floating through the air
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Jacquie StewartHeimann
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 January 2008

yet beautiful poem, i like it, well penned with economy of words and i offer 10+, thankis for sharing

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R H 16 June 2006

Lovely comparison of those fleeting moments conveyed with such an economy of words Kind regards, Justine

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