Saturday, August 22, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

That's all it took was a little time
Yet it seemed eternal pain

Now when I greet the morning
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Tracey TEE
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Stephen Stirk 27 August 2009

Some of the greatest poems are shorties. This has rythmn rhyme and, more importantly, meaning. Great poem Trace Best Steve

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 August 2009

Hello Ma'am.. I am so glad you have written something new! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hey this is good, people say I should live with my head held up high too... easier said than done though.. Anyway a moving, touching one.. loved it.. more than anything I am so glad to have back....10+++ lovess shan

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Great one Tracey. Self respect is so important and to hold your head high is the best way to be. Time heals as you are finding. I enjoyed or rhythm and rhyme too. 10 Karin Anderson

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T S 22 August 2009

I have had a little time away all for a good cause though, hope all my Ph friends are well x

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