Thursday, April 19, 2007

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Is there still time?

To put you straight?
To uncover secrets,
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Cecelia Warner 29 April 2007

You are wise beyond your years! YES, by all means there's still plenty of time. Maybe some time has benn squandered by just about everyone but... YES! ! ! ! Don't ever give up or you will be defeated (and you do NOT sound like one to give up that easily. Am I right? I will bet I am. BTW, I only bet on a sure thing (don't like to lose.)

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 20 April 2007

Great poem Ally! I like that you put much thought into it and made me think as well...thats a Good thing! Well written and just an interesting piece of work.Many true thoughts were weaved through this poem from beginning to end... Thank you for sharing Ally. ==shelley==

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