i took apart a watch
and found, studying the pieces
that time wasn't in there
of course it wasn't. it's in my head. good work, short and sweet.
You pen your truth with great economy, Cia. Three fascinating lines of wisdom. love, Allie xxxx
Wish I thought of this one short & sweet, and has to get a smile from anyone that reads it
...this young lady is not only a fur-king good writer, she's a philosopher to boot
Short and sharp, this poem made me laugh. Maybe there is an important point here. That properties change, when we look deeply and take apart on inspection. Excellent 10/10.
Short Simple and most of all Expressive and Great loved it koni
this is too cute! ! ! But, it will have you going in circles too. Conundrum.xxElysabeth
i did that once, and a bunch of little springs popped up. I found time, the time i wasted trying to put it back together. This is excellent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Cia Superb piece....I enjoyed this time with you....thanks Love, D.