Friday, March 10, 2006

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Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock
Watch the Clock
Late for Work?
Feel like a Jerk?
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David Darbyshire
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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2006

Let me know when you are about to throw that clock Dave, and I will duck as time can hang heavy sometimes and I would hate to be hit. Clever write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Joy Vanderhelm 10 March 2006

Hah! I laughed right out loud at this one. A great write. Only I wish, again, that it was longer. Thanks for the great laugh, David.

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Patricia Gale 10 March 2006

Funny, yes throw the clock! Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 March 2006

lol, light and happy. Love, Gina.

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Maddy Jones 10 March 2006

ooh i love this poem! very good and its flowy!

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