Time Comments

love and time becomes relative in this beautiful poem

After we met evrything changed.

Before we met, there existed no time

Time is one of the secrets of existence. Einstein wanted to know its origin but passed away. Here in this poem, the focus is on the other person through time. Sometimes the poet loses himself and his existence in order to know the meaning of life, it is amazing topic, well done.

I couldn't find you I was drowned deep Drowned to the bottom Of the ocean of feelings And the Time stands still Here without you dear.

The time of love is very short seemingly though years after years are passing But time of suffering is very long though it's going thru very short moment!

Beautiful. The flow the story gripping to the end short rhythmic phrases....hmmmmm....they could do with a nice 1 2 3 4 beat